Writer’s Brief | Batman: The Monster’s Wife

PROJECT: A Batman Fan Fiction Story

 

TITLE SUGGESTIONS:

~ The Monster’s Wife

~ Echoes in the Attic

 

FORMAT: 2-Part Serial (Approx. 2,000 words per chapter)

 

AUTHOR: Open to all

 

GENRE: Domestic Horror / Gothic Thriller

 

THE CONCEPT

Kirk Langstrom transforms into the Man-Bat and terrorises Gotham but his wife Francine is the one who has to clean the blood off his shirts. This story ignores the vigilantes to focus purely on the domestic horror of living with a monster.

The story explores Francine’s denial, her desperate attempts to cure him in secret and the terrifying realisation that the beast is starting to remember who she is.

Francine thinks she is protecting a sick man but she is actually locking herself inside a cage with an apex predator.

 

TONE & STYLE

Think Hitchcockian suspense, The Invisible Man.

  Quiet, paranoid and deeply unsettling. The horror is inside the home: a locked laboratory door, muddy claw prints on the carpet and the sound of leathery wings beating against the attic window.

  Francine must be shown as incredibly intelligent, fiercely loyal but ultimately terrified of the man she loves.

 

CHAPTER ONE: THE COVERUP 

Word Count Target: 2,000 words

Core Focus: The stressful routine of hiding the truth and the failing cure.

SUGGESTED SCENES / BEATS

1.  The Morning After:

Open at dawn in a massive, isolated gothic townhouse. Francine finds Kirk passed out naked on the bathroom floor covered in scratches and someone else’s blood. She mechanically cleans him up, burns his ruined clothes and locks his laboratory door before the maid arrives.

2.  The Denial:

Kirk wakes up with no memory of the night before. He believes his serum is failing but thinks he is only experiencing blackouts. Francine smiles, lies to his face and tells him everything is fine to keep his heart rate down. She is living a constant, exhausting lie.

3.  The Secret Work:

While Kirk sleeps during the day Francine uses his lab to desperately synthesize a permanent antidote. She is a brilliant scientist in her own right but the bat DNA is mutating too fast. She realises the transformations are becoming more frequent.

4.  The Awakening (The Cliffhanger):

Night falls. Francine hears a crash from the lab. She runs upstairs to find Kirk mid-transformation. His jaw is unhinging and his eyes are completely black. Instead of smashing through the window to escape into Gotham as he usually does the creature slowly turns its head and looks directly at her.

CHAPTER TWO: THE CAGE

Word Count Target: 2,000 words

Core Focus: The creature stalking Francine inside her own home.

SUGGESTED SCENES / BEATS

1.  The Lockout:

Francine barely escapes the lab and deadbolts the heavy oak door. The creature begins tearing the room apart. She runs downstairs to call for help but realises if she calls the police they will kill Kirk. She cuts the phone line herself, choosing to handle it alone.

2.  The Stalking:

The creature breaks out of the lab and begins hunting Francine through the dark, sprawling townhouse. It is a terrifying game of hide and seek. The beast cannot see well but uses echolocation, forcing Francine to remain completely silent while hiding in closets and under beds.

3.  The Antidote:

Francine makes a desperate run for the kitchen to grab the experimental, untested antidote syringe she left on the counter. The creature drops from the ceiling and corners her. She realises the beast recognises her scent, hesitating just long enough for her to act.

4.  The Vicious Cycle (The Ending):

Francine plunges the syringe into the creature’s neck. The beast thrashes violently before collapsing into a screaming, naked Kirk. The chapter ends the next morning. Kirk wakes up in bed, asks Francine how he got there and tells her he thinks he is finally getting better. Francine looks at the fresh claw mark scarred across her own arm, smiles and tells him everything is going to be fine.

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